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The Letdown

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There was a time in my life when I enjoyed looking up at the night sky and pondering over the association of the celestial landscape. It was my greatest source of energy renewal. Over the years, I had forgotten about this simple act that provided composure.

Here’s another poser scribed in the year 2003:

The Letdown

And there are always voids.
Sometimes the clouds appear dense,
but a slight shift may reveal the glitters.
It may expose a wider entrance to heaven.

The discreet are the frail ones,
shattered beneath their layers
even when a halo shines through;
The rest are such misty they
drift to fabricate the dominant
source of light in the night.

The mysteries of the skies
let in confusion,
and here I am, doubting
a child who used to dream.
Platforms to show all who are watching,
to show a similarity.

And they clear.
Back into their hide-outs,
hibernation proves detrimental.

I put this poser on the web years ago and someone told me she could relate to it. To be inquisitive, can you?

* Image was taken from Free Digital Photos: Moon Night by Salvatore Vuono

Written by premit

May 18th, 2010

Filed under Introspection

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  1. I love the way you write.
    It brings comfort to the soul.
    Keep up with the good work :)

    Ja

    24 May 10 at 22:42

  2. Ja,

    Thank you for your kind words. :)

    ;premit

    premit

    25 May 10 at 10:31

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